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The Eye by MJP67 The Eye by MJP67
This is a graphite sketch or drawing of the eye ([link]) of one of the most beautiful women on DA - . I got this image from her stock account

It took me about 4 hours give or take using graphite pencils 2H through 6B. I'm very proud of this. I know it isn't exact and my technique sucks but it is probably the best sketch I have done to date. I have only been drawing since September so I'm very happy. I hope I did justice to her eye. Once I'm a bit more confident with my skills, I might attempt one of her full facial shots. She has the most amazing features and smooth skin. Give her a visit.

Any critique on how I might have improved this drawing would be much appreciated. I could really use the help
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SIM4earthFREEDOM Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2009
pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.pretty.
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Brett1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2007
You are to cool...love the eye
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MJP67 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
much appreciated Brett
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anassalnor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2006   Traditional Artist
:wow:

beauty :)
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MJP67 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks very much!...
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dark-politics Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cool. I believe that if you add more contrast, as in, the darker values darker and the lighter values lighter, you will get an even better flow. The main problem here is that the whole picture seems to tend towards the same tone, with only a few parts really sticking out (the iris). I specially liked the eye lashes on the lower eye lid.
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MJP67 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks.. I really appreciate the directional comments. As a beginner.. they really give me something to keep in mind as I draw more.. thanks alot.
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lechuza Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2006
Great shadows and light in your drawing!

I like the 'different' perspective in eye 'coz there is no very common...

Congratulations... I love it, yeah, more 'coz you use H pencil... I like a lot this pencil...


+dev!
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MJP67 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2006  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you ever so much!! and thanks for the fav!!!
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craftyunicorn Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2006
I love the eyelashes.
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